alcohol and moontans

 

interminable night   dawn forever arrives   as a variation   in the texture   of air   a cold sweat   lapsing into forgotten   soon after the vague   sepia tincture   ceases its creep   along warm   archaic carpet   in here   barflies greet a dawn   with bent elbows   chump change   and a phosphorous   amalgam of alcohol   perfume / cigarette breath   and   as many a time   i feign ignorance   to each new   impending end   there is always   the day outside   challenging me   to remove   the costume   put my hands   where it can   see them   and exit   quietly   into order

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[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

a cold sweat



lapsing into forgotten



soon after the vague



sepia tincture



ceases its creep



along warm



archaic carpet
Always your words are fluid blending unto one another.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

the title is so instantly a call for attention. powerful. and you carry that through with a wry, yet nostalgic tone..

(one thing, which you're prolly correcting as i type this: "always" ;))