old house

a short scarry story,

      in the old city of no where, there was once a big, old, and for saled house. mr, abraham's family was going to move to the that city. in three days, thy moved to that house. it very scaryy house and i think it was a place that no one in the city wanted ever to go and live there. in that house there was a very strange thing, which no one knew what was it. but what every knew was that this house with the fisrt week you live in, you able to hear stgrange sounds. Mr, Abraham at the first moment h entered that house, felt the sense of death. he was unable to ensure that to his family because it was just a feeling. he was very worried because of the way the house was build. the house from inside, was really dark . it was a house that maybe all people on earth would be scared of seeing it, but because Mr, Abraham was unable to make for a better house. he had no chance but this to a buy a good house. (countinues)

Reviews

[A.E. Reed]

It's a good idea, needs a little development, and I see you did it in five minutes. Why? I mean it's up to you but why not double check it? I don't know, but if you were to continue it and worked longer on it I would love to read it! :D

[alan.essam]

there are some mistakes because i worte this i n5 minutes.