Feel Something

Feel Something

A Poem by al25

Not sure I understand

This road Im taking

I think all day long

Trying to figure this out

But my mind speaks

And I cant seem to comprehend

 

I need to feel again

I need to feel something

 

Im always exhausted

But I can't seem to get myself to sleep

I take a drive

Try to talk to myself

But instead I sit in silence

Dreaming when Im awake

 

I need to feel again

I need to feel something

 

I scare myself to death

And I just cant help it

There's something missing

And I can't deny it any longer

Why don't you give me a hand

Please don't just leave me here

 

I need you

I need to feel again

I need to feel something

© 2011 al25


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haven't read any poems in a while and this was the perfect welcome back into it. love the intensity when you say "i need to feel..."

Posted 13 Years Ago


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an extremely poignant piece of writing
that "need" often leads us out of
feeling numb
or so i think

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was great and relatable.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, this is great! I can feel the aching need so strongly in my heart. Great emotion! I loved it, and I can totally relate, which makes this piece even better, to me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can relate because I always feel like something's missing.
Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


always exhausted, just can't help it.......don't understand the road I'm taking....just can't get myself to sleep........something missing.....you.....I need you.....I need to feel...........anything......excellent


Posted 13 Years Ago



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al25
al25

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