Hiding

Im stuck in the bottomless sea

And I'd like to make myself believe

That I'm alright

I'm hiding and no one knows

They don't

 

I've been waiting

I've been screaming

Coz Im wishing

But no one hears

No one knows

 

I aplogize a million times

But Im selfish

I should deal with this

But Im hiding and no one knows

They don't

 

I suppose you would know

Everyday I'm loosing a new part of me

I want you to feel how I've been feeling

But you don't

No one does

 

I'm sick and cold

Tired of pretending

And its okay if you don't like it

Because I won't fight no more

I won't

 

I lost my place

Lonely and sad

The sky just looks down at me

I'm damaged at best

Im hiding and no one knows

They don't

 

I try my best to be guarded

But I can't keep up

I'm falling apart and no one knows

They don't

 

I don't know where to go from here

I'm hiding and no one knows

They don't

 

 

 

Reviews

[EvilAngel]

Wonderful writing. a poem most people can relate to. i like what you did for the last line of every stanza. i really enjoy reading you're pieces...you're very talented;)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

emotion packed, deeply moving poem of pain......very well written.

[0_o Abbie]

aw... *tears. I wanna give you a hug. >< hug hug. This is so beautiful on so many different levels. I just love it. *tear, I wish I could give you a hug! :D Yeah ik I'm a loser. :D

[Stef Outsiders]

Wow, I really felt this and I can relate to easily... emotional read for me... but good piece!!