Please

Don't feel much anymore

I'm stuck in the same place

The stars are so loney in the big dark sky

And i still cant feel a damn thing

Cant please anyone

Not even the ones who love me unconditionally

Tired of all the sleepless nights

Tired of all the sad dreams

Its getting harder to keep breathing

 

Why do I still keep breathing

Why wont I just die

No one will notice

I will be doing the world a favor

One more lost soul out of the way

Why wont you just make me alright

It wont take you much

Its just a damn word

 

I try to keep faith

But everytime I make the same damn mistakes

Im only human

And this is more than I can handle

I dont want to keep going on like this

Im all alone in the dark lonely nights

No one understands

No one can dry my tears

No one will ever understand

 

Please help me

Im on the floor

Begging you please

Reviews

[EvilAngel]

you keep saying you're only human.does that mean you're kind of referring it to god? im not too good at analyzing so i probably dont know wat im talking about

[Katie Louise Hughes]

awww this was very sad.. I hope if this is true you are getting better and more happy... beautiful in the way you express your emotions.

[Sports Girl]

This is a very good poem. I can hear the pain and sorrow in it. I feel this way a lot. Mistakes are apart of life but at times it can seem like thats all a person does. Great job.

[Marie Harrison]

I can feel the intensity and the power of this poem grow from beginning to the end. The urgency is strong in your voice. Certainly hope you feel better soon. I feel this way from time to time. I guess we are both hard on ourselves. Our failures in life mean that we are living. LIfe is about getting messy and making mistakes, because with failures come our successes too. Wonderful poem.