Sorry

About my ex-gf

I'm sorry.

I'm sorry I lied to you all those times.

I'm sorry I made you cry all those nights.

You said you loved me, I laughed at you.

You said you need me, I ignored you. 

I promised I'd protect you then I hurt you.

I promised I'd be with you then I betrayed you.

You were the sun I was the clouds.

You were the bolt I was the hammer.

You were the drum I was the drummer.

You were the smile I was the frown.

Now I sit here wishing the rain would fall and take away all the things I said, all those things I did.

I'm sorry I infiltrated you.

I'm sorry I deflated you.

I'm sorry I played you.

I'm sorry I betrayed you.

I'm sorry I hurt you.

And most of all I'm sorry I never said goodbye.

Reviews

[Moonflower]

This was very relatable. great write

[KaySea]

great job

[Lovely Lady]

regret.

[bbb]

Very good write. I wish more people in life were this honest about these kinds of things. Well written, the ending making it even more sorrowful.

[Atheana Kylee-S. C.]

Wow, I can relate to this in LOTS of ways...
Great poem...

[Coyote Poetry]

Those words "I'm sorry and not saying good bye" leave us sad and disappointed. A powerful poem with some logic. We learn from our mistakes to become better if we are wise. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[DamienHino]

dang! :/ this girl was mistreated...words wouldn't be strong enough to make up for failed actions. great poem really loved it, I went along with it nicely flow and everything

[nono]

You can't always tell people your sorry...I say sorry about the smallest things....And sometimes saying sorry to people...sometimes when someone tells you sorry over and over again...after a while...the word sorry looses it's meaning...

[Stripes]

This a beautifully sad poem. The regret the writer feels transfers and overlaps gorgeously and it's like the reader is the person going through this.

[Melody]

i like this too! first u mention about the result of your action, then later u move on to how you were regret about your action. the link is great.