I want to feel

I want to be in love.

I want to know how it feels when you think about that someone all the time.

I want to hold you.

I want to be with you.

I want to be inside you.

I want to know everything about you.

I want to let you in.

I want you to know who I am.

I want to feel my skin on your skin.

I want to kiss your nose, the back of your neck, your thighs, your a*s, your everything.

I don't want to be alone anymore.

I apologize if it's taken me this long to find you.

Please hold on because I'm bound to find you.

I won't stop looking for you.

I will be yours.

I will protect you.

I will feed you.

I will touch you.

I will hold you.

I will breathe you.

I will save you.

And maybe you will save me from this loneliness thats slowly killing me.

I don't think there is much left to break.

I don't feel anymore.

Reviews

[0_o Abbie]

aw. So sweet and sad. Love it.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

i really enjoyed this. i gave you Most astounding because i enjoyed the love being showed through this. Thank You

[Brianna Brie]

I will be yours.
I will protect you.
I will feed you.
I will touch you.
I will hold you.
I will breathe you.
I will save you.

A lot of heart in this poem! Great job!

[FocusedAmnesia]

Great use of repetition. It made the emotion behind your words stronger.

[Katie Louise Hughes]

This was intense, and from all of your poems that I read, I think this one carries the most emotion. I agree that the repetition really helps and delivers a strong punch to the reader. Thanks for the read, and keep up the writing!! :D

[SharkBite]

I'm diggin' the repetition (I want to, I will). Makes a lot more of an impact.

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This is such a powerful write here,
I like this. Flowed so well.

[Wicahpi]

I think we all want these things,
well, most of us. One spells typo (thighs).
May all those wishes come true!
and WELCOME!