Pain and Suffrage

Pain and suffrage isn't a gain

My heart hurts as it grows

It's pitiful that you don't try

Try to make it better 

Try to help 

Try to fix it 

Try

Try and 

Try again

And soon you will succeed

Author's Note

its kiddie i know dont judge me on that

Reviews

[cheeks]

i like the concept of the poem, it's a good base that you can work into an amazing piece.

[Pharaoh]

It doesn't really make any sense. The sentences don't blend together, and I'm truly not sure what you're trying to say with the poem.