REMEMBRANCE

                   

                 REMEMBRANCE 

I remembered the day we both accustomed to 

enjoy dusk and dawn together,

even we took the pledge to remain as one forever...

My heart embraced your love and care,

never faced the sight of problem as you were there...

The wind and rains knows to you how i am attached,

but all goes in vain when from me you were detached...

Even today my arms are waiting for your touch,

and every moment my breathless heart 

worries for you so much....

Now the thread has been broken of our friendship,

because a harsh storm has taken away our

sweet sailing ship....

                          

                                                    

                   

Reviews

[Stanley Wilson]

Beautifully written. Really enjoyed it.

[Vandana Sharma]

It speaks of a friendship that is more than a friendship:), but even if things get wrong ,there is always a chance to make them alright.

[Rahul]

so nice of you...
this piece is damn nice and it''s totally heartfelt to me. Nicely penned , words're taken from youse heart..painful, lovable heart. you made it ffrom youse heart....nice;y penned.
great job..you deserve to get this 200/100.