EVERLASTING PAIN

                              EVERLASTING PAIN

                           A realistic thing occuring in everyones life,

                             and each time giving an advice......

                               I know its diffcult to overcome,

                           or it will play with us like a drum.......    

                                 But always greet it as a season,

                  which does not comes in our life without any reason.....      

                          Its a natural thing which we can only feel,

                       but have the guts to eat it as everydays meal.....

                                           Its ridiculous pain,

                                     don't let it go in vain.....

                                Although for us it islike a knife,

                              but its an important part of life......

                           

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

Sometime wrong or bad things happen to us..
but that doesn't mean happiness we not come..
you will become happy soon..life is always like this..
life wants you to feel sadness so that you admire happy things :)
nice poem..Keep writing!!

[Akshita]

thnx...

[Akshat♥]

u r welcome :)

[Stanley Wilson]

deep and thought provoking

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

Touching !

[Krithika Raghavan]

Very true. Pain is such an integral part of our lives though we feel like kicking it sometimes.
You've written this quite passionately, love the season parts. Wonderfully written.

[Balkaran Sidhu]

true... nicely portrayed

[zainul]

Very true events of life depicted vividly.
Could you check the spellings of some words?
everones

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