Freedom- Evil or Bliss?

"I am a boy laid up with expectations and crave for freedom,but should I neglect all these lingering hopes of those who look upon me?..Read on to sympathize "

Times,there are,when they want us 

to work full days,and never crave for break.

Learn,who desire to be free,this damn truth.

This world doesn't want you to be free.

We live with chains,we want to shed them.

But that's a sin, they say.So much of theirs 

depends on us,loads of responsibilities lay.

Look from their eyes,Isn't being free evil?

'Free' is selfish,for self,'live earn and spend',

leaving them to starve.'Free' is unkind,

you break limits of conduct,and you sound 

rude to them.'Free' is a total sin!

'Free' is lazy,you rest, relax, you don't

work for your goal,and lose precious time.

'Free' is something to be damned.But my heart,

boxing against my chest,yells at me to be free.

'Free' makes us happy,that's just what

matters to many.The only remedy left then :-

"This world and it's crafted views don't matter to me.

I be free or I better embrace those chains."

If we want to be answerable to

the gatekeepers of heaven,then shun this

'Free',and start working and living for others.

It's purely your choice,and not my advice.

Author's Note

Please tell me what do you think about this poem...............