Steals Sans Stealing

Dedicated to someone I love immensely

That rosy tinge, enamors her skin. 

So much it'd singe, if my fingers limn 

her contoured, grooved, freckled minutiae, 

carving tours behooves my fickle veers 

On her chest, enticing gleam summons me, 

Where rests, the icing cream to my glee, 

In her nest, a beast pulsates in our heat, 

It suggests, at least, for us soulmates to meet.  

***

Her radiance permeating my tepid wheeze 

In obedience, she brings me in rapid ease. 

Cascading whirls, curls unfurl, 

 locks my grip, at my fingers, twirl, 

Her splendid brush of hairs rest bare 

When ended, flush in layers at breasts, smeared 

Strands stuck to skin, festooned by sweat. 

Grand luck, like a win, our attuned eyes, met.  

***

Swathes of care inflates my heart to burst. 

It's a lot in there, creates a part of her 

pristine self in me. Her benign love brings 

Umpteen help settin' free, a fine dove swings 

Fluttering in a dispersed sky, her lips 

Quivering as she whispers a cry, that dips 

In my ears, appeals to a feeling torn apart 

For years. Steals sans stealing my forlorn heart.

***

Author's Note

Please share how the poetry made you felt. Would also appreciate criticism and ways to make the poetry better.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

So very passionate. Filled with desire and ultra romantic! Akshay, this is superb! The scattered rhyming makes the words flow and yet there is a sense of urgency...and then a sense of euphoria. Really enjoyed. Lydi**

[Akshay Rawal]

Thanks Lydia!! I'm glad you like it :)