A girl

i pass by this girl everyday..i cant call her ..i cant even talk to her ..but she visits me .she talks to me ..its so frustrating ..she disappears ..

A girl,she was quiet 

seeking for joy ,she got fined !

seconds,minutes,hours passed 

blaming her ,she again went far

whispering to herself,she got up to fight

seeking for joy ,she got fined .

A girl,she was upset 

upset a word;she dread of 

rounds and arounds she went by 

gotta get em she filed for 

blameless,shameless,careless,she got up to fight ,

seeking for joy,she got fined .

A girl,she got caught 

in the labyrinth of sufferings she never dreamt of

troubled,feared,harnessed ,she got up to fight 

seeking for joy ,she got fined .

  

Author's Note

well,she talks to me ..she meets me everyday !

Reviews

[Mari R-J]

I really like it but can you fix the punctuation? I think I got a little lost because of that.

[Twistedwords]

I love writings that make me think! This is a very interesting piece indeed! :)

[Morgan Yai]

This is a really interesting poem/message. It intrigues me because I don't completely understand it, but I can catch on to certain more general ideas that are definitely relatable.