cant make it

YAY!!! first chapter

Run keep running. “Hmmm” the girl mumbled. I snapped “SHUT UP!” 

Hi im troy.17 and a criminal need to be put and jail and probably killed. The reason I have this kid? My dad. He needs them. Im not good enough. Or he would kill me. No I mean for real kill like a murder.hes crazy. And my mom? Apparently she’s dead. But I know she’s not. After that he went nuts fear him ok? So anyways.my dad sent me out on this trip to get another kid. I sighed”im sorry, ill try to get you out you will be safe just be on my side”. I felt hot tears on my hand. I was carrying her like a stick.shes about seven. I found her coming from a friend’s house. She was smiling until I got her and knocked her out. I threw up. Good and hard this time. At school im a quiet person but I also throw up too. More than anyone. So I dropped out and stay home trying to figure out how to get these kids back. As I got to my front door. I saw the trunk where the kids where staying. Tom the oldest was with his sister Mary. Who was four.they were playing in the dirt.i went inside.my father with brown hair and blue eyes like mine was sitting brushing avas hair”Ava!,Honey!,You have hair like your daddy!”He exclaimed.Hit her with the brush and knocked her down.i gluped and she shuttered.Shes been with us for Two years.i looked outside.Mary was in the hiding place.a tree trunk.i craved it out when we got ava. Only food and water are in there.they all have to sleep on wood every night. Sometimes I bring blankets out there.they are like my little siblings. But after they are gone.They will forget about me.But something wasn’t right.Tom was gone. I saw him running. “SHOOT” he screamed and grabbed the gun