The Rest of Their Profile

It just drives me nuts...

 

So many great free thinkers here

and those who write to live

Youngsters who have seen too much

older folks with more to give

 

Together we hold each other up

inspire, guide, and train

Encourage, read, and evaluate

take it to a higher plane

 

Some forge dynamic friendships

that will last for years to come

Others just come to post their work

they’ve got to get it done

 

But whatever makes us click the link

no matter what our style

There‘s nothing more disappointing than…

"You must be this writer's friend to see the rest of their profile.”

Reviews

[J]

OH! I didn't expect that ending! Good job! It surely does limit access, and truthfully, sometimes I am happy for the privacy it affords ......... and other times I would like to know m.o.r.e. ......... like before accepting a friend request, ya? Quick question, should plain be plane?

Enjoyed this, D. Well done! Thank you!
j

[Jacqueline]

Oh man, what a good write! That was a humdinger, but oh so true statement put in poetic style. You give off a folksy charm from these lines.

[rachel D]

this was great. i loved the whole thing but the ending surprised me! it's all too true.

[Bubo]

Ha
yes I agree and love the way you have written this, bought a smile to my face........can't review if you can't see the work!

[Jenny Davis]

Haha! They should atleast give each user an option to do that, rather than make everyone's profile private! Very good points here :)

[Rain]

LOL..This one made me smile. Ever so true. A pat on the back, and a kick in the butt. I liked it. Rain..

[Celtic Cat]

lol....trust me, it's better now than it used to be. The only thing missing now is comments between writers...what is shown is what the author says about their selves, which to me, is much better when the original site changed removed the viewing of even that!!! Since I've seen them answer to some pleas...it never hurts to send an admin a note...
Excellent write about a topic we can all relate to. Very structurally sound and stimulating. Thanks for the invite.

[Amor-de-angel]

How very annoying it is. I do agree with you.
Charming write.

[Lydia Shutter]

Wonderful! You are so right...how do we know we want to be the friend of that particular writer if we can not read about them a little bit? I loved this! Great rhyme and rhythm!!! Lydia

[Helen Woodward]

Well said! Applause... this is nicely put together with no obscurity (refreshing) and what you say is ery true.
We are all here to learn and I must saytht the reviewing of others work hones your own writing ability.
I disagree with the friend topic as I wold not like utsiders (and that's who it targets) to roam around more than they already do...great piece Ak...
Helen :-)

[Emily B]

Well said! It wasn't always that way, you know! That was one of our improvements. But we still have the main part, the most important part, where they explain who they are in their own words.