Sweet Dreams

Sweet Dreams

A Poem by AK
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An unexpected lullaby

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Sleep now to dream
that you might touch His face
He’ll whisper your name when you’re there
 
Ask Him to show you
all that’s in store
while safe and warm in His care
 
Tomorrow will come
this life will go on
but tonight take the time to renew
 
He’s waiting beyond
it’s been far too long
such blessings ahead for you

© 2008 AK


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This is precious. So tender and sweet. Another winner, AK! Love-Love-Love your work! :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think this is incredibly beautiful. its quite opposite of me, so it takes me out of my head.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Calming and sweet

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful, very comforting to a loved one. It feels like someone is touching you gently and telling you its safe, you have nothing to be afraid of. Very nice.

Thanks for the review. I agree with you, it was a bit repetitive. I'm learning as I grow:-)

Argentina

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sleep sweet little one. And we, all of us, are the ones being cared for. What a comforting thought! I'm glad I read this tonight. The words we surround ourselves with seem to make all the difference.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I felt such a spiritual lift....this is so calming, and so serene....this poem had so few words, and packed a powerful punch...Loved it

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a soft lullaby. I sense the spiritual intentions, but without spelling them out you allow all readers of various beliefs to appreciate the warm soothing tone of this work. Great job.

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Inspirational poem. A job well done. Keep writing

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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Ah D, beyond beyond. This is positively inspired. A tender, swaying breeze promising such peaceful slumber ... this is a gift. It is divine. ~j

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

good lullaby, this is. :)

Posted 17 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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