A Hundred Years of History

A Hundred Years of History

A Poem by AK
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For Harley Davidson's 100th annivrsary

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The fuel valve gets opened first

Next the key’s turned on

The choke is set exactly right 

And then the gloves slip on

The neutral light reconfirms 

Soon thunder’s gonna roll 

The leather jacket’s zipped by now 

This Hog is good to go

 

The starter strains a little

But it cranks that 96 twin

At 9.2-to-1 times two

Life roars from deep within

A snarl, a grunt, two puffs of smoke

Both cylinders ignite

Ya gotta crack the throttle some

If ya don’t, it just ain’t right

 

It’s runs a little rough at first

Let it warm up just a touch

Then push the choke in easy

Don’t lean it out too much

Now the big V’s hummin’

Well… more like a nasty growl 

With dual straights on this machine

The neighbors cast a scowl

 

You gently slip it into first

Then ease out on the clutch 

A hundred years of history 

But right now you don’t care much

You run the gears to sixty-five 

Then settle back to cruise

You thank the Lord for Harley’s

And America’s right to choose!

© 2010 AK


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This is really cool. I love the way that you portray the being of a Harley without actually sounding like a disgruntled old biker. At first run I thought some of the language was a little rough cut, but I then I realized the voice and speech you're using here works perfectly for the piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Felt that throaty growl.
Lived for a time in No. California where there was towns
of Harley folk.
Rolling thunder!
Great piece of Americana!
History the way it should be written.
Love,
Jack

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ride to live, live to ride lil lady. bro's and ho's. :) j/k

loved this.

great work.

l8r g8r
-Tao

Posted 16 Years Ago


When you "cracked the throttle some," I could feel it in the base of my throat.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was so wonderful! My dad loves Motorcycles so he got me into it some, too!
And this makes the best motorcycles seem even better!

Sara Seay

Posted 16 Years Ago


i like this peice. very well done.


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very entertaining poem. I loved the imagery and mood it stimulated.

One constructive criticism:


'...It's runs a little rough at first...'

It was lively and thoroughly enjoyed.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Makes me want to watch 'Easy Rider' again. I like history and I like motion and the poem has both. It, the poem, is also a well engineered piece of writing that exudes love for the machine and the romance and dreams of freedom it offers. But it is also as much a poem about a slice of America's soul as a poem about a classic motorbike. I enjoyed it for all these reasons.



Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I really dug this piece. I truly think you did them justice! Thanks to Emily for sharing it with me. And thanks to you for writing it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You've done justice to your passion [or someone elses's passion that you're depicting] here; the rhyming helps the flow, and romanticises the beginning of this ride - romanticising is often bland and overdone, but something about this piece makes it work and feel just right.
Nice descriptions and narrative voice.

Overall, good job and thanks to Emily Burns for sharing this with me.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Harley's is a legend. To hard corps bikers, it's a dream come true. I respect that. This is a beautiful tribute.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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