Take me home

Take me home

A Story by Akash gaikwad
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Wrote this just to get over a song

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He - can you "Take me home"?

She - yeah !! but for that you should
let me kiss your soul.

After the kiss "Damn! You are my home",
said dead body to his grave.

© 2018 Akash gaikwad


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It's a short story technically and literally! Superb!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your amazing review!!
Short and to the point.you did not beat around the bush and this is the first time ever happened


Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading !! I appreciate your review!!
Different, but well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and for the compliment.
Very different and unique. I like it. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating style!! And compliments!!
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You again stunned me Akash! Wasn't expecting such deep down dig at all...but twas!!
Impressive dude😊

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

I was waiting your review thank you so much!!!
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6 Years Ago

Oh, that's sweet! You're heartedly welcome😊
Very interesting. There is a deeper meaning hidden here. I like it. :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


Akash gaikwad

6 Years Ago

Thank you!! I am happy you liked it!

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Added on June 21, 2018
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Akash gaikwad
Akash gaikwad

mumbai, worli, India



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