diwali

Diwali is a festival where now people love to do pollution. So this is about my views on them.

Pata hai iss shher mai log shant q hai
Q ki yaha Sab apne aap mai chup hai

Yaha kon sahi kon galat yeh kissi ko nahi pata...
Pata hoga toh bhi kya ukhaad lege

Yaha pe sabko aapni padi hai

Yaha matlab or bina matlab yeh ek hi kahani hai

Jo phuke cigarette woh kare pollution ki complaint
Or Jo na phuke cigarette woh phode diwali mai bomb

Insaan toh aache milege yaha par
Yu samjlo unki nasib ne unki maari hai

Aapne bache ki muskan kliye Sabki zindagi laga dege daav par
Ek hi din ki toh baat hai roj roj ki thodi hai Jo tu bhdaak raha hai bhavv

Har koi jo yaha baith hai chal raha hai sunn raha sabke pass kahani hai

Tu bata mai kis kahani mai bharosa karo

Sab story ko inclusive toh nahi kar sakta aachi kahani mai

Maan ya na maan kon hai tu bhagywaan
Mai ravan,tu savan
Barse paani tapke patre se
Naali se gujre mile samudare se

Aakhir ek hi hawa toh breath karte hai humlog
Nahi bro kuch log alag breed k hai
Mask laga k phodte hai bumb

Sachayi ka ek hi dharam
Muh band rakh d.k Bose
Next station hai tera antt
Par shah antt hi arambh

Author's Note

I am from Mumbai ...so I have the sea view but every year on diwali festival.people come with fire crackers and disturb aquatic life and do air pollution. Thus happens is publicly. So this is poetry about it.

Reviews

[Mrudula Rani]

Only those who know the language you wrote the poem can review this poem.

[Akash gaikwad]

Yes!! I would have translated it but the poem is written in free verse and in very slang language... Because of the slang you get the tone of the words and that makes it easy to understand!! I will try to translate this one!!!

[Mrudula Rani]

That would be nice. Not every one knows Indian languages. Thanks.

[KeeD]

I love how the poem dwells in the irony of the people of Mumbai. Being from Mumbai myself, I see this first hand, they have a saying here " baap ka rasta hai kya?" which is so typical, everyone thinks it's their birthright to do whatever they f*****g want. This poem is like a breath of fresh air in the polluted society we live in, great word choice and I can feel your emotions when you vent via these words. Keep it up, my dude!

[Akash gaikwad]

Thanks for reading the poem!!
As a mumbaikar we both will know that the diversity of rich and poor in the city is the biggest irony we have!!! People lives is nothing more then a joke left by corrupted minds. I guess we already are drowning in the poison sea and we still can get out of that!! But only if we the young people come out and do something for the city.

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"Tum log bhul gaye ki race jahase khatam hota hai wahise race shuru bhi hota hai"!!!!
This careless free writing is awesome to read😀👌👍

[Akash gaikwad]

Thanks for reading!!! I am glad you liked it!!!
I got that ending from an Indian show called shani.

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Oh...I see!!
Shani...colors channel!