caged

It's an abstract poem. I am presenting my views while looking into a window glass which also reflects me and I can see the world too.

Caged in mirrored window
The final deduction of reflection
Didn't came out of thin air
But from my own breathe
I sat near the still river looking into it
And I see me...I thought darkness could have covered me but the moon has rose in my eyes....
Let the sun go down make the world round...give me a flat discount cause man's not hot...
I get pulled into another universe where I belong
It puts you in different music & songs where people scream and moan
They say this meaning less word in pain
Sometimes they call it poetry,rap,dubstep and future base.
My brother told me bro this words are dust
Don't wear'em they don't shine...I rinse my self in the rain.
My tear my game.
I have wrapped my self with thorns. ...then you blew my face with fragrance and kissed me made a victim of self love.
Your are no poison I am sick before sixteen...
I am a sick rose, you are the pure water...you are in my roots..wrapped my soul like boons
I am not questioning the cage
I am answering the mirror
What a misery of unheard name

Author's Note

This just expression of a phase which I was going through

Reviews

[phill..m]

The poem triggered a thought of we all live in a psychological prison
but we just don't see the bars. Great poem.

[Akash gaikwad]

I liked your interpretation of the poem it capture the message of the poem!!thank you for reading it and for review!!

[Relic]

Self-reflection often carries a burden of some kind. We may see ourselves as not good enough, or unable to find happiness. Then someone special comes along and changes our view, making us more able to accept a better view. Life is hard but things always improve somehow.

[Akash gaikwad]

It's true that self reflection carries some kind of burden but often those burden are fears,insecurities and our comparison of life with others which is over reflectio.n often the people who are intense they over reflect their self and end up with bad judgment for their self. Thanks for sharing your wise words I will remember it. Thank you for reading.

[GregoryM]

Clearly, you have deep feelings and your expression of them helped me understand what you are going through. I once read that poetry is a language that helps a person grab life by the throat, I think you are well on your way to expressing that. Thoughtfully written Akash.

[Akash gaikwad]

I take poetry as an expression try to be honest with myself I write down whatever I feel. I am so happy you were able to connect with the poem.

[Earl Schumacker]

Hi Akash,
Nice images. Nice poem. The mirror and the cage say a lot. Keep up the good work. Earl

[Akash gaikwad]

Thank you for reading and sharing your review.😊

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Wow...I liked the last two lines of the second stanza and really liked it....
"I am not questioning the cage
I am answering the mirror"
It's amazingly done and I found a meaningful finish at the end!!
Great read here....Happy writing😊

[Akash gaikwad]

Thanks again for reviewing my work. I feel happy that you liked it.

[¿]

You're heartedly welcome! 😊