Bury the note.

This poem describes my various experience and it's effect on me.

sometimes people kill you with their words and they won't even realize
Once when I was kid I didn't ate food
So I was beaten up and I said I was unlucky

She killed a happy person inside me and buried me inside me

Once when I was happy for my dance performance but before it
their speech of we teach underprivileged kids.

They killed a wealthy dancer and buried me inside me.

Every time when my friends parents
Look at me with sympathy and made realized I am an orphan.

They killed a child and buried me inside me.

Every time when I was judged by my clothes and when he stopped me from entering in a mall.

He killed a open minded person and buried me inside me.

My friends n***a every time they proved me I am not their priority.

they killed a friend and buried me inside me.

When a lover became a stranger.

She killed a lover and buried me inside me

When a girl once said to me you are boy
You won't understand.

She killed a boy and buried me inside me

Once my poem got misunderstood,

So they killed the poet and buried me inside me.

So Here I am blaming the world calling them killers but
I think I am the one who killed myself before you killed me.
I am the one who buried me inside me.
And this left this note to kill you.

Author's Note

If you didn't understand the poem plz let me know.

Reviews

[¿]

Woah! Reminds me the dialogue of Dear Zindegi.."You stoped my while crying at childhood and I forgot to cry...and now I ain't able to cry in my pain...cause I forgot"
It's a really terrific writing..From the topic you picked and taking all the acuse at your shoulder at last was really appreciating work!
Happy writing😊

[Akash gaikwad]

Thanks !!! I really appreciate your review.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is a powerful very personal piece of work and i ike it, thanks so much for sharing this with us all and entering my poetry competition.
This is a very deep personally spiritiual sort of poem and i like it, thanks again so much for your share.

[Akash gaikwad]

I am happy that you read and felt the deepness of it!! Thank you!!

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

you are welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

Killing of people hope and energy. We do sometimes without thinking. Hard world when you have talented and different. Your words hard, raw and true. It is sad when the one dreamer become a killer. Thank you Akash for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Akash gaikwad]

I am glad you understood and liked appreciate your review!!thank you for your kind words!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Onlyme]

By letting another define who you are, Just lets them destroy your own heart, mind and soul inside you. And like lets them win. A bad term of use.
Because other people are upsetting and angry and annoyed, frustrated, Means towards you. Actually means they are the one with the problem, not you! And just reflecting and taking their woes and upsets out on you. None of us in this vast world are perfect. But to let another person. Make you suffer and feel bad. Is Wicked. Never let alone control you or lose your own identity or self-worth or respect for yourselves be you for who you are. Not be someone else because of someone else.

[Onlyme]

ps I really felt your hurt, pain, suffering. Learn to love you and move on from all this bitterness caused by others.. You will feel much better for you alone.

[Akash gaikwad]

I think most of things that you have said I understand them very well.I have been trying to move on from this I had my on journey but sometimes the heat is unbelievable and then I sit with regret but the great thing is I understand and don't harm others ....I am on my journey...thank you for you kind word and understanding appreciate it !!!

[Onlyme]

your welcome, your like me, if you some of my stuff you will see,i relate to you.

[Pooja Chintamani]

Wow..how beautiful craft ..your words made rebirth of what buried inside you..

[Akash gaikwad]

Damn!! That's a wonderful way to appreciate it!! Thank you so much!!!