Duskus - Find youA Story by Akash gaikwad It's a story about a boy who misses his father
Lying on his bed with his deep and intense eyes he is staring at his dad's painting.
He misses his dad and tries to find him in the painting. In the painting there is a big forest. Painting is in light pink and light blue shade...at end of the forest in deep there is a kid walking Also there is a deer antler in the painting which is lighting in sky blue colour. there is real deer's antler hanging just above the painting. He gets up from his bed takes the antler and starts to go out of the house ...while stepping out of the house he see's his father stepping inside the house. Both of them ignore each and walks away. He then walks towards the the forest which is near his house...after getting into the forest he wears the crown and starts to wonder around in the forest and tries to find his dad. This has become his daily routine with each day passing he is more angry and depressed. Also with each day passing the painting is slowly fading away. Every time he see's his father entering the house he holds fist in anger and wants to bash him but he can't because he loves him. The kid in the painting has almost faded he is unable to make meaning out of this painting and he is angry about it more then he usually is. This time when he steps out and see's his dad he tries to push him out of rage ....then he say's I hate you dad... His neighbour is looking at him. He is confuse because he can see no one and thinking who is he fighting with... After fighting with his dad he runs towards the forest he wears his antler and climbs a tree to calm his anger. Then from the tree he see's a deer near the river who's antler are shining in sky blue colour .....he gets down the tree and runs towards the river and their he spots the deer They both are staring at each other The kid turns himself into a deer and his antler is lighting in pink.... Though when he turns into a deer he not as big as the deer in front of him...he is like baby and other deer is like his father Both of them are still lookin at each other Now they both start running towards each other and finally they crash each other antler.... as soon as the antler's crash both of their souls come out of the deer .....his fathers and his The bodies of deer turns into the spark of pink and blue and goes up in the sky...and turns into the star.... After that he runs towards His father and hugs him.... I miss you dad kid say's .... Both them walk towards the a tree holding their hands. Sitting under the tree the kid hugs his dad and rest his head on his stomach and sleeps. in the morning when the kid woke up he realizes his dad is gone again....kid starts to walk towards the home holding the fist in anger...after walking a while he turns back and looks at the tree where they were sitting. He see's there are two antlers.... Then he looks forward opens his fist...closes his eyes and imagines his father is inside him and starts walking. Slowly he opens his eyes and forest is in pink and blue shade. © 2018 Akash gaikwadAuthor's Note
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Akash gaikwadmumbai, worli, IndiaAboutFind you - A kid that misses his father Youth - story of a spirit monster Mate um bonito hone mesmo - not reviewed yet by anyone Cursed empathy - a poem about why am i empathetic. Bury the note - .. more..Writing
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