Easy

she lasted sixteen years but gave it up on Thursday

on a hazy new year's eve

booze boosted stupor, a face remembered vaguely

and she never heard him leave

yellow Post-It memo on the bedside table

next to a stained bed

who knows, I might see you around

you were the best I ever had

anyhow, happy new year, gotto go now

thanks for the beer

Reviews

[darkgurl]

Short and to the point well written.....Kim

[CLUTZ]

wowzers!!! i don't know what can b said about this. sounds horrible, but then again it sounds like the title states. the girl was loose. no offense if this is true. i never know. very good.

[BEEGE]

This was well written.
It sounds like either a bad one night stand
or the something worse. Maybe my mind is thinking
on too many cylinders here...I dont know.
Anyhow, good write.

Beege

[LacyBug]

really good! i liked it. just a short simple poem. keep up the good work!

lacy :)