You were . .

A few minutes of compilation and finally stands a short crisp poetry .

You were..

Laying down in the cold rainy day, gloomy dull and full of emptiness.

You came as my sunshine with that smile u wore

And the fingers you ruffled my hair alone.

Those touches and glimpses of your eyes conveying thousands of unsaid words,

Millions of stars though I am touching them all at once.

I knew the moment you walked away, waterfall of emotions flowed away.

Standing there, closing the door behind. You came and you just went.

 

 

Reviews

[Onlyme]

This is superb, short, sweet, interesting, thought-provoking and even sad.

[Nightstar]

This was great you should write more.

[Akankshya Mishra]

Thank you @Nightstar . Its really delightful when creative people offer their compliments :) Glad!

[¿]

People some in life are more like wind or breeze...comes in seconds, away in flickers!!
Great read twas..thanks for sharing😊

[Akankshya Mishra]

So true .. Thank you for reading ..
I love your works as well :)

[Correspondence]

"Millions of stars though I am touching them all at once." Love this. Definitely write more like this ~

[Akankshya Mishra]

Thanks a lot for reading my piece of writing . Really feels acknowledged ! :)

[¿]

Did you know?

That you're already welcomed!😊

[Riddhi]

I can feel this...Wow...You expressed your feelings and emotions in so beautiful way..You are a good writer and you have a great potential as a writer..
Looking forward for reading more of your works...
Keep on writing.

[Akankshya Mishra]

Hi Riddhi, Thanks a lot for such an overwhelming response. Rally appreciate your positive encouragement. I'll surely keep posting and writing . :)

[Riddhi]

You are really a good writer dear..I am eager to read your other writings...