Hecotr and Icarus

i was just bored and decided to write a story .. lol i don't even now what im writing about lol.

end of time we will take but not give and we shall see to those suffering from our soulless brothers to see once more that there is no harmony left in this pathetic world were the greed rules and whatever you do shall be seen to judge until the end of time.

i was just a boy unseen from this pathetic world you call earth. i have lost my mother
now im alone barely can i keep myself from killing myself . yet i know im stronger than that this a battle field and i shall win this war with death shall be my partner and he will follow me to destroy those who dwell in greed and darkness i shall be strong, and wise .

10 years later .....

i have trained for this day to come look out there world beware humans i shall surround this world with a dark cloud . first target is  Amelia  the one who took my virtue and left me to die in this world.. 3 hours later ..... Amelia wheres my sword we have an intruder in sector 1 .. Amelia: everyone to their posts and security to sector 1 careful target is heavily armed, it seems this human wants to die. hm don't underestimate this man Amelia Ive  heard of this man it is believed that he killed 34 people and made 132 people surrender to him. shut up hector you think a mere soul is going to make me scared.

SECTOR 1
Ha they think this pathetic soldiers are going to kill me  (Icarus the hope of life and the fire inside me makes me immortal if i fall i shall rise again).I see the intruder, fire at will boys, what the heck holy s**t Amelia we need backup this is not a man,  keep firing.

Icarus: fire blades of fury strikes through their chest, taste the misery of a thousand souls that you have taken and may your soul be mine. Ame.. Lia hes reached sector 4 we cant hold much longer. hector i order you to kill this nuisance , right away milady.

SECTOR 4
Amelia were are you show yourself you coward. no need to yell my boy hector's here to put you out of your misery by the way don't you want to be with your precious mommy.
 
scene 1

battle of Hector and Icarus 

hector= my boy you have grown now i cant wait to end your life
Icarus= are those your last words old man , i hope you prayed for your redemption
hector= enough my boy im tired of your voice hiya
Icarus= shied of darkness . ha your human powers wont help you, flee while you can old man.
hector= my boy what lot you still have to learn.
Icarus= argh so what if i don't have a shield i still will kill you- blades of inferno
hector = my falcon sword will crush your bones.
Icarus= enough you fight me ahhhh....

so the battle begins. . hector strikes with his falcon sword  Icarus blocks with his half broken shield. Icarus strikes back with his blades hector easily blocks it and throws his scorpion spears  Icarus dodges but gets strikes by one he does not not care he jumps and aims for hectors heart , hector easily evades him and hits him with his falcon sword crushing Icarus arm. Icarus cries in pain but it only makes him furious his focus becomes stronger he aims with his blades and throws, hector throws his spears.
hector gets hit  in his leg and his arm. Icarus gets hit  in his crushed arm. both now even in speed. Icarus might have a chance.

suddenly Icarus falls and faints form the poison of the scorpion spear hector is relieved.
he drags his body to Amelia.....

end of chpt 1....



 

Reviews

[H-Jonesy]

Hm.
Its confusing, interesting, and Captivating all in one shot. the only thing i had an issue with was the simple grammar issues...but then again...who cares? ha.
Anywho, this seems interesting...ill keep my eye out for more :D-

Harmony

[Shawn Killian]

A little choppy, and not quite fluent, but man you got the start of something great here.