Comparisons

Comparisons

A Poem by aisling virginia

Love is like a rose, 
It smells sweet, 
But can prick you with thorns of sadness.

Life is like a cloud,
Getting tossed around,
Blown about every which way.

Death is like a rainy day,
It's bad for a while,
But then you realize, they aren't really gone.

Love, life, death... 
Rose, cloud, rain...

© 2012 aisling virginia


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it is great to compare love to rose, life to cloud and death to rain. love is similar to rose in color and amazing out look although it can hide pain inside.

life is not permanent so it looks like a cloud, when the cloud is formed, it takes some time till it gives her rain and then disappers.

comparing death to rain, death is the last stage of life as well as rain is the last stage of the cloud....
i really liked the sequence you made here

Posted 12 Years Ago



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