Clouds

The clouds drift across the perfect

blue sky.

I dig my hands into the sand and look up.

The sun obscures my vision but I look long enough to see

a perfect heart in the perfect blue sky.

I thin of you and how you used to be like that

perfect heart in the perfect blue sky.

Perfection, that's what you were.

Perfect eyes, 

hair,

body,

smile,

grades.

Perfect everything.

I look up again and its gone. 

Just like you left me.

Gone in a second, no goodbye.

Reviews

[patricia]

you have painted a picture full of treasured images and captured the loss and lack of proper closure perfectly. A sad but beautiful write.

[khalid]

oh......so sad poem but at the same time it is really great in images of natural love and passion as well as nice words picking.
it really hurts when the people we love leave us suddenly, this is the most severe hurt any can ever bear! i liked it really