YOU AIN'T ME

YOU AIN'T ME

A Poem by Amanda

Hey Girl, YOU AINT ME.

Me is someone you could never be.

I am way to good to be like you.

So don't even try to fill these shoes.

Me and you just dont compare.

I know it sucks but life ain't fair.

EVERYONE knows I am everything you are not.

 I am amazing, smart, and very hot.

He doesn't have that love for you.

Give it some time and you'll be through.

Just know in the end.

IM ALWAYS THE ONE.

The one you can't be.

That's right: YOU AINT ME.

All you can do is try.

But his love won't ever die.

So listen to what I have to say.

You wont be here tomorrow, so enjoy today.

Keep in mind: YOU AINT ME.

and me is someone you could never be.

 




© 2010 Amanda


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we're all unique indeed~ sad when others try to fit our grooves instead of developing their own~ confident expressive poetic with excellent cadence~

Posted 14 Years Ago


You wont be here tomorrow, so enjoy today.
Keep in mind: YOU AINT ME.
and me is someone you could never be.

Love this, I wrote something similar to this.
This is amazing, love the flow and attitude.


Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this! I like the rhyme scheme and the attitude! Great job, and keep up the good work! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 7, 2010
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Amanda
Amanda

Cocoa, FL



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