Karma

Bridges burning in the flames of fury
Extinguished only when forgiveness wins
Or when the breeze of life
Blows the embers of charred lumber
In the path that I walk

Reviews

[Writer-brooke]

It's a nice poem. Better then many that I've ever seen.
Good job :)

[blaqpearl]

love that... short and lovely

[Alex Boyd]

Metaphors are always fun to use and this poem use that perfectly. Very distinctive in it's wording and might I add very insightful. Seems to me each word has a meaning that the audience must figure out just lovely.

[Bella]

It's so short but so good, awesome job on it!!!

[Matching Socks]

Ha! Love that!
Nice job, very clever.