Lovely Little Poem

I had a poem on here before it was deleted. I can't find it on Google and unfortunately I didn't have it backed up. So, here goes my second shot at it.

This feeling,

awakening the conscience,

a tingle in my waist,

travelling down - in between,

arise and walk to,

joyous relief in the bathroom,

Smiling, unzipping,

Sincere pleasure with my hand,

First morning piss

Reviews

[Heavyhearted]

i like the language and the tone... regardless of the ultimate theme you have successfully captured my senses... then of course i ended up laughing. in a good way!!

[Wildecat]

Short sweet and too the point.

[TL Boehm]

oh goodness - it starts out so - almost intoxicating and then comes the toilet....OK I admit it. I laughed my butt off! Nicely done!