Mr Wag

Mr Wag

A Poem by Andrew John
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Iambic pentameter

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We really rather love our Mr Wag.
A bag of music, music in a bag.
Such masterpieces did he once produce.
We listen every day to Mr Wag.

Oh such a man, a wit was Mr Wag.
Oh what a dish of gifts, oh what a bag.
A Ring he made for us to hear, not wear.
The Nibelungen sent by Mr Wag.

So “Rheingold” was the first from Mr Wag.
And then we had “Walküre” in the bag.
The Ring then brought us “Siegfried” as the third.
The fourth one᾽s hard to say, dear Mr Wag.

Could cause some difficulty, Mr Wag,
for “Götterdämmerung” is in this bag
and can be hard, this “Götterdämmerung”.
You see that “o” and “a” there, Mr Wag?

There᾽s also that name here, oh Mr Wag.
We say as “Vahgner”, and it᾽s in the bag.
So “Wag”, you see, is “Wagner”, that OK?
For that word's in the bag now, Mr Wag.


(16 Jul 2023)

© 2023 Andrew John


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An entertaining read about a musical genius, but some of this is lost on me. I think I may have to use Mr Google. Stanzas well penned and the flow is easy on the ear Andrew.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Andrew John

1 Year Ago

Ah - although you may have found it by now - it's about Richard Wagner's Ring Cycle, and the four op.. read more
Chris Shaw

1 Year Ago

I have just inherited a huge collection of classical vinyl. I need to go through it and see what’s.. read more
it is startling that such a nasty individual who preyed on friends and was so stuck on himself could make such beautiful music...this is one time when we try to separate the person from his work.

Wagner the genius...just ask him.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Andrew John

1 Year Ago

Yes, he did have his bad points. It's always difficult to choose: do you ignore some great music bec.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

no, we don't ignore the beautiful music, but we do wonder how it came from him......
jacob erin-cilberto

1 Year Ago

It is like how did such beautiful poetry come from Arthur Rimbaud...despicable character, beautiful .. read more
The rhyming seems to flow very nicely in this poem. Its very rhythmic and has a feel to it, almost like a rap. Very entertaining to read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Andrew John

1 Year Ago

Thanks for comment, Dianne. It can be hard to like a genius when liking his music, even if he's a na.. read more

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Added on July 17, 2023
Last Updated on August 22, 2023
Tags: wag, wagner, ring, siegfried, gotterdammerung, nibelungen

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Andrew John
Andrew John

Carmarthen, Wales, United Kingdom



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