Bright Sight

Freeverse

Did this bright new poem encourage me
to use my brand-new pen?
Or did this brand-new pen encourage me
to write a bright new poem?

Did seeing your bright smiling face
bring me so much joy?
Or did the sight of joy in my eyes
cause the bright smile in your face?

Oh, which way, which way?


(26 May 2003)

Reviews

[Akinlolu]

Your poem flows so naturally I find it a joy to read.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I think your pen brought the joy and the smile.
j.

[Andrew John]

Glad, J. Thanks for the comment.

[Chris Shaw]

Questions I don’t know the answers to but I am more than pleased you penned a poem and gave me a smile. Thank you Andrew. Have a great weekend.

Chris

[Andrew John]

Thanks, C. Good weekend for you, too.