Deep within

Sometimes we are too shy to confess the feelings of our hearts and it hurts us too bad

Deep within,
where tears can not reach and eyes can not see.
Where pretence is felt and loneliness experienced.
That is where i shall hide my pain.
.
I may be called an introvert and a nerd,
nouns are just naming words,
they do not describe.
.
There where blood can not reach and oxygen can not go through,
i have told our story over and over again.
My heart is cloudy,
my tongue pregnant with words.
My mouth is sore,
I wish to express what is deep inside.
.
I have no guts,
yes that i know.
I'm too weak to hold your hand and tell you to stay,
i'm too shy to even say.
.
But dear,
deep within.
That is where i will store up my pain until i find courage,
but believe me,
when that day comes,
i shall smile and tell you;
its from deep within!

Author's Note

Be as critical as you can,that will make me grow as a poet!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked how you used the language.
"My heart is cloudy,
my tongue pregnant with words.
My mouth is sore,
I wish to express what is deep inside. "
The above lines are amazing. Good words will be expressed when needed. I like the old wisdom.
Don't waste your words. Use them properly and make them worthwhile to another. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote