A world we live in

Just a short something.. :)

A world without truth, a world without happiness in youth, a world where we are all alone, a world where we atone for sins that we had never made, a world where we have fate, a world where try to reach our dreams and forget the past, a world that wont last. That’s the world we live in, that’s the world I met you, that’s the world where will all begin and end in the end.

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

That is the world we live in, the world we live in with our mortal lives, the world where bad things and good things happen. Beautiful, AirWind. You've captured the essence of the world, its goodness, its evil, its darkness and its light. Who says you're not good at writing? You're amazing!

[mariah]

wow, you say your not good at writing but this is beautiful. it flows well, allthough it is not a poem. keep on writting, i think you have a talent for it :)