She was dressed in different outfits for each season and
holidays. A five foot three inch mannequin for all intent and purpose was to
sell the merchandise in a display window. Her facial expressions never changed
as she was made of wood and just stood wired and nailed to the floor with
colored lights decorating the department store window. Michael took the extra
steps to put on her makeup and carefully select a wig for whatever occasion she
was in. There was bond he had with a non human form since his social life was
practically non existent. Nobody else was in the display room to see him talk to
her as if she was real. It was a private love affair between a lonely twenty
five year old young man and a five foot three inch statue of wood. Wedding gowns
were the item for June and Michael prepped the window display for a masterpiece
that would never be forgotten. He measured her wooden finger and bought a
wedding for this special occasion. The window display was complete as Michael
went home that night and slept with a smile. He didn't show up the next day and
his boss stood outside the display window to view the June bride along with a
crowd of curious and interested shoppers. A new mannequin appeared next to the
bride who happened to have a change of expression on her face. Huge smile that
was never seen before. The likeness of groom was very much like his former and
missing employee Michael. He didn't say anything but knew in his heart what had
just happened. After the store had closed, the bride and the groom kissed for
the first time. Case in point in a short love story beyond reality, that took
place with no one to witness an after hour event in front of the display
window...
'Her makeup and carefully select a wig for whatever occasion she was in. There was bond he had with a non human form since his social life was practically non existent. Nobody else was in the display room to see him talk to her as if she was real.' So wish i'd not known so early that she was.. what..
This reminds me of an O.Henry short story, has similar sentiments but without the dialogue. Perhaps you might add some and bring this beautiful love story to life. Presumptuous for me to say, yes, but.. feel free to tear into one of my scribbles!
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10 Years Ago
I used to work in a department store as a window dresser. That is what gave me the idea to write thi.. read moreI used to work in a department store as a window dresser. That is what gave me the idea to write this.
'Her makeup and carefully select a wig for whatever occasion she was in. There was bond he had with a non human form since his social life was practically non existent. Nobody else was in the display room to see him talk to her as if she was real.' So wish i'd not known so early that she was.. what..
This reminds me of an O.Henry short story, has similar sentiments but without the dialogue. Perhaps you might add some and bring this beautiful love story to life. Presumptuous for me to say, yes, but.. feel free to tear into one of my scribbles!
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I used to work in a department store as a window dresser. That is what gave me the idea to write thi.. read moreI used to work in a department store as a window dresser. That is what gave me the idea to write this.