Steady Feat.

Steady Feat.

A Poem by aimless_wanderer

The muddy trail cakes your entire body.
From head to toe grime covers all,
leaving less than a trace of cleanliness.
Easy the rough trail is not, to succeed though,
all energy must be removed from the soul.

Challenging the quest may be,
but with heart you can persevere.
The trail climbs up, swerves right, leads down, and back up.
He will not break for nature's wrath.
Pummel all she wants,
but once obtained his feat. will reamain.

© 2011 aimless_wanderer


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aimless_wanderer
Looking for awkward line within the poem, and lines you may have particularly liked.

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hmm
Easy the rough trail is not, to succeed though,
all energy must be removed from the soul.

...i liked this part, very good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Cincinnati, OH



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