Hank

Hank

A Poem by ailme

There once was a spider named Hank,
who decided to go rob a bank,
he pulled out a gun,
shouted 'nobody run'
but noone could really understand him cos spiders don't really speak english that well so his plan kinda failed really. Lol at Hank.

© 2010 ailme


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Hahahahaha, awesome.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this moved me to tears with its beauty

Posted 14 Years Ago


write more and more and never stop.
i kind of feel a bit sad for Hank.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The end line is so dramatic.. it fits in really well with the tone of this piece. An excellent write Chloe. Oh, and I love the aabbsletfkdsjg rhyme scheme you have opted for here. Genius work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 22, 2010
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ailme
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Caerdydd, United Kingdom



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