Our Days

i would have to say this is an unpopular poem of mine, but to me it is the most emotional one i have written so far and it is a personal favourite. i love reading it, its very personal :)

It's been 660 days at least 
Since i kissed you 

day one, I felt the pressure full force kicking me in the face 
I felt the regret
Thinking I could have changed myself for you 

Then for hundreds of days 
I forgot your stupid face 
And I avoided your eyes
Boys have blue eyes that make you want to die

For hundreds of days 
I forgot about putting my head by your heart
I blocked out our first kiss
I erased the memories and I never replied to that last text 

Then the days of 600 came
The pressure made a return 
again, a full force kick in my face
When I looked at your eyes 

Love wasn't supposed to be unpredictable like people say it is

I told myself that that wouldn't apply to us
But it did, it still does


Love was unpredictable because I never knew I could fall so hard for you in the smallest amount of time for love to possible stick it's vines into me. I never knew it was possible for you to rip those vines out so quickly, out of no where

Love 
Love is still unpredictable because I was in a f*****g building with you for hundreds of days and it didn't hurt anymore. Then the 600's came along and it hurts like it's still day 1

Reviews

[Blogger]

This is intriguing. I cant help but wonder if this was a co worker, or fellow student? It would seem that strong feelings came out of no where and stayed. I mean: Really stayed! I also wonder if things are still possible in this situation? I am a romantic at heart.

[aidan otoole]

I appreciate the comment, it is a fellow student :) I'm so glad you could see the poem the way I do, since this is a very personal one sometimes I think it may be confusing :) Thanks so much!

[Blogger]

You are very welcome. These strong feelings are remarkable.

[Enayet1999]

This is intriguing, and i think you got the potential to become a famous poet. May i ask if you could review my prologue?

[aidan otoole]

whoa that is SO kind! of course

[Enayet1999]

Its all right

[Enayet1999]

Cheers for your comment, what do you think i need to work on on my chapter one?

[aidan otoole]

I'd say it is going very well, but as it progresses add some new characters to the story! I myself love creating characters and well-developed characters can always add twists to stories :)

[Enayet1999]

thanks b, u got facebook?