Youth in the Dark

Youth in the Dark

A Poem by aidan otoole

let our cravings free in the dark,
daylight restrictions keep your hands off of me

but in the dark, watchful eyes are blinded,
and we are finally alone

silently stepping around the rules
boundaries that we ignore,
young years where we aren't supposed to be like this

quietly, don't let anyone know
we hide behind the silence
with my hand over your mouth

it's easy to paint our faces with innocence,
but then we laugh
we spent the whole time lying

don't let anyone know what we do in the dark,
when people are around we play pretend,
the picturesque disguise of "just friends"

it's hard to wait until the sun dies
just to feel your touch,
but I'll do it forever,
or at least until we grow

© 2014 aidan otoole


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I wonder if this 'thing' is really that hidden from everyone. I have heard that when feelings are this strong between two people it is OBVIOUS to everyone around. Am I wrong here?

By the way, the writing was good or I wouldnt have bothered saying anything. :0)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aidan otoole

10 Years Ago

You are definitely right that it quickly becomes very obvious sometimes! I find people who know us w.. read more



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I wonder if this 'thing' is really that hidden from everyone. I have heard that when feelings are this strong between two people it is OBVIOUS to everyone around. Am I wrong here?

By the way, the writing was good or I wouldnt have bothered saying anything. :0)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aidan otoole

10 Years Ago

You are definitely right that it quickly becomes very obvious sometimes! I find people who know us w.. read more
Love and desire know no boundaries, man made or otherwise. I really enjoyed this.

Beccy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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aidan otoole

10 Years Ago

thank you!! :)

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Added on July 17, 2014
Last Updated on July 18, 2014
Tags: young, youth, love, sexy

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aidan otoole
aidan otoole

dartmouth, Canada



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I post my writing initially on DeviantArt (link provided if you're interested) and then the writing I like best, I post here. I love this community and am so glad I joined! The comments I get really i.. more..

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