Haiku Set #1

Haiku Set #1

A Poem by Aidan
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Back from winter break hiatus!

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frigid toes hang out
want you close to keep me warm
through this long dark night.

solidarity
        trying to hold the world up
                           always to stand tall.


raindrops fall quite heavily

staining the concrete
          darkly

puddles swallow trash.

© 2014 Aidan


Author's Note

Aidan
I'm new to Haiku, so I'd very much appreciate any feedback or pointers you might have! Each of the three haiku are separate pieces. Thanks

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Added on December 29, 2014
Last Updated on December 29, 2014
Tags: Poetry, Haiku

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Aidan
Aidan

San Antonio , TX



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