Untitled #2

Untitled #2

A Poem by Aidan

Letting go

as a parting of glass,

or a shattering of the soul.


The pieces will rest where they fell,

and all seems lost.


But,

from the destruction

there is renewal.


Life is lived,

and lessons are learned.

© 2014 Aidan


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Precise , clear statements give this piece its beauty.However consider using 'as' in place of 'like'. :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


Aidan

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the suggestion!

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Added on November 5, 2014
Last Updated on November 10, 2014
Tags: Letting Go, Moving On, Learning, Life Lessons

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Aidan
Aidan

San Antonio , TX



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