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A Poem by Aidan Oberholtzer

A radiant soul, 
Her heart plays a song, 
The light has dimmed,
But the sound carries on.  

© 2016 Aidan Oberholtzer


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Short and sweet. Inspiring.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like this one a lot, short and simple but still made a point.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Stunning and cleverly concise...the light may dim but a beautiful heart always shines :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is short but sweet and simple. Glad I took the time to read it. Thanks for sharing your beautiful words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


OH wow! This is a really good one! Beautifully written, short and simple :D

keep writing :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful poem. The song will continue to play on. Cherished memories will never die. I like the imagery. Lovely expression and well written. Keep writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely.. Not everyone can hear the sound though, can they?


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A clever piece of charming brevity and imagery. Nice stuff on the plate here!:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely.. Not everyone can hear the sound though, can they?

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 19, 2016
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Aidan Oberholtzer
Aidan Oberholtzer

Lancaster, PA



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