Bifurcation

There is light in her smile, 

 Darkness in her departure.

With each and every mile,  

 The craving grows harsher.

The moon is all that keeps us close,  

 Every night we stare with hope. 

Truly only God can know,  

 In which direction the wind will blow. 

Reviews

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written keep it up and well penned!

[Aidan Oberholtzer]

thanks a lot!

[Urja Gokani]

welcome :)

[SadBones]

This evoked alot of emotion in me. 10/10 !!!!!! :)

[Aidan Oberholtzer]

Thanks for reading!

[SadBones]

I love this so much! I need to shelve it lol

[TheNightShift]

I like this poem, it has a mystical spirit to it. It's also thought out and rhymes well, which is more than I can say about many poems that are posted on this site, including my own.

[Aidan Oberholtzer]

Thank you! I enjoyed your writing.

[iamshadowine]

wow! this is beautiful! really liked it! keep writing :D

[Aidan Oberholtzer]

Thanks a lot!