birth of a sinner

A dream of being free of what I strongly believe in

Supplied by moral values
I venture into the land of sinners
Over confident with my own devices
I march through the darkest road
Careless for what to come
And blinded by my own self righteousness
I trip to fall into the arms of hidden decay
Slowly but surely I lose my senses
And with a gulity astonishment
I smile and dive deep into my own wickedness
Kicking what once was my guidness
I eat and drink the evilness
Only to be reborn again
free from what once was my imprisonment. ..

Author's Note

My first poem to show to others

Reviews

[Dakshta]

One word.. wow! That buddy was brilliant and was awesome.. just one question.. how is this idea of being free?

[Ahmed Al-zubaidi]

Thx for taking time to read this
The idea of being free is that you sometime wish for sins wish that you can do mistakes and get accounted for it and the idea here as I feel is sometimes we are so arrogant we think we are good but yet we long for sins and mischief

[Dakshta]

Longing for sins isn't that good of a idea.. don't you think?

[Ahmed Al-zubaidi]

trust me we all longing for our dark side its like the forbidden apple

[Dakshta]

even though I always want what is forbidden but sins are never in that list..

[Ahmed Al-zubaidi]

we have to agree to disagree

[Dakshta]

yes we do :)