O, Indwelling Sun!

Written : May 4th, 2010 - Tuesday - 5:25 PM

[ O, Indwelling Sun! ]
























Thee I invoke, the Bornless One.
    The Core of every radiant Star
Come create below this shining Sun
    Come and conquer every manner
Come fulfill the Truth in Motion;
    The Truth sharp in every Matter
For my Self made - True Perfection
    One drop of divinity scattered.

Thee I invoke, the Shapeless One.
    The Joy of the Lion & Serpent
Come breathing, like flowing Sun
    On the orbit of self-alignment
Redefine all human conceptions
    That are Within and so Without
Imprison the limits of perceptions
    Of which are Ignorance and Doubt.

Thee I invoke, the Innermost One.
    The flame that burns in my heart
I commit to thee, utmost reunion
    And detachment from thy depart
For my Self, far beyond has gone:
    Transmigrating into pure, divine Art!
Now manifest in me, O, Indwelling Sun;
    For I am, the most Conquering One!







( © 2010 - Ahmad Alhour, All Rights Reserved )

Author's Note

This poem carries a lot of meanings to me: Mystical and Magical; that I have proudly discovered through out my journey!
I have never stopped - and never will - pushing the structure of language to it's limits... to it's boundaries... forcing such simple words to reconstruct and redefine every aspect of elemental meaning, delivering such message so subjective and complex in result of this manifestation of Art that has even amazed me!

This poem is a declaration of honor and proud that I dedicate to my True, Secret, Inner-Self... My True Will to power and to prosper that keeps me carrying-on, exploring the various dimension of Truth, that are in my conquest of the microcosm & macrocosm of Knowledge and the Mysteries of Existence...

This is about the divine potentials in Man!

Reviews

[Nella Aboodi]

The way you put the words and ideas into this poem is so vehement..
I also liked the messages it carries along in these lines:
"Redefine all human conceptions
That are Within and so Without
Imprison the limits of perceptions
Of which are Ignorance and Doubt."

Marvelous work.

[Hani Okasheh (Mad Arab)]

Divinity encrypted in words..... Utterly spectacular!!

[Wondering Mind]

Some deep philosophy here structured perfectly.

[A.r. Bazian]

why do i feel? why others may not!
first, we of course must agree, that the structure is almost perfect!
personal opinion: i love it when you flow in such pattern!

now; i feel because i tend and lean towards individuality, towards unity with the universe... towards being one with the architecture of the universe! in our most conscious states, that in which we manifest our glory!

i understand the thought, the philosophy, and the lament in pursuit of oneness! and the sweet lavishes of arriving!

others may not!

here it is; the difference between a sophist and a philosopher. you my friend have a philosopher within you, that speaksts of oneness so graciously, that the simple minds, doest it offend! one must bare the wisdom of centuries to come of knowledge of yer barings! let alone, an understanding!

not empty, but relatively emotionless!

you see, modern day writers aspire out of pain, and so have poets of old; for it is suffering that validates the most piercing of emotions! and hence the words of a poet, to provoke that very emotion in readers!

you aspire to glory, and wisdom... that is why Plato was not known for his flow, but rather for thought! whilst Virgil was plundered with emotion and verse he sought... that is why Dante was known for Hell, whilst Virgil ventured in his book!

you see the difference? but both wrote in rhyme!

Shakespeare was known as a play writer rather than a poet, whilst Thomas gray known as a poet, was none as nothing else! but we both know that Will's poetry was much better than Gray's in structure, but gray had an intense emotion, that will failed to deliver regardless of his everlasting romantic and otherwise wise words! Gray had emotion!

you feeling me?

[darem aq.]

wondrous write my friend !
The Born-less one: a call for perfection.. the unborn hope and motivation.
The Shapeless one: the morph of emotions, deception and trust.
The Innermost one: the passion and selfworshipment.
as so I understood.