Reckless Thoughts

[ Reckless Thoughts ]
 

A winter has begun,
And tears become so tyrant and sore,
Upon these lands,
Of this benighted lore...
Stigmas I sense not,
And in sensation I am being drowned...
For no Matter is true,
In which reality is shown...
Appearances of all surroundings left,
Within voids of reframing thoughts...
And nothingness of lines I wrote...

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Reviews

[Yereziah]

I love this, so relatable..."winter"...!hooray for depression and inspiration!!

[poetic soul]

impressive! strong enough!!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Arthur Crow]

As always, I am left most impressed by your thought provoking lines. You are a unique talent that I enjoy very much!

[Nella Aboodi]

I love the adding of a few rhymes in this poem, it gives it a tone.

[Greystone]

Uh-oh. Neverending winter? ._. Nicely written. Something about this poem....I dunno....uproots me. Not necessarily in a bad way.