Hauling Calls From The Graves Of Silence

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Then...
Darkness fell...
And the mist of twilight shadow...
Was forced to lie...
Chanting the midnight hymns...
As an angel's whispering cry...
Uninvited came a winter breeze...
Green as the innocence of autumn's blood...
Carrying the vividly damnation...
Through our hatred's seeds...
As sorrow of the fullmoon...
Reap the wind-screen...
I am here all alone...
Shades of grey cast to the sky...
In the deepest night of a mortal life...
Before the wrath of thy might,
Shall rage foully as withering rites...

 

A waching eye
Behind the curtains of night...
Where the burning candles
Were choosen by death to bring the light...
Silence with such a faithful sin
Was burried beneath,
The brooding of thy grimmest sight...
Untill then...
Restitution of servitude,
Emerge for thee...
To obtain thy morbid rites...

 

By the innocent sacrilegious,
For a virtuous soul...
Slince has gone... nor relegions,
To bring a call...
A virtue emitted within,
The cemetery of the blinded fate,
To revive the ultimate damnation...
Utilizing our morbid shapes...

 

Calls were spawned to bow,
Hauling the souls to row...
Heard from a cascet of stone
Upon the cemetery's throne...
Heared from the graves of silence,
For the nights eternal moon,
Shall bring the crimson violence...
And as the frozen dawn yawns,
Ere the nights of the dismal silence...
Legions of fire and filthy flames
Breaking the world's rails,
To the astral guidance...
Into a heretic minde-maze
The musing meditation of liberty
Manifest so truthfuly blindless...
 

( © 2006 - All Rights Reserved Belial (A.Z.Alh) )

Reviews

[A.r. Bazian]

indeed... strong and capturing!
good diction... using standard old english with both skill and purpose...
what is it that's within you that burns you out so badly... questions you want to ask... or answers you want to find?
the basics of dark teleology and philosophy are clear... but basically it must be based on questions and resulting into answers... it would sound a lot better if a few more questions were asked IN PLACE...
ur conflict with god... might very well be eternal....
over-all... the poem is great and well written!

keep it up ol' chap!

[Raivenne]

WOW! Such incredibly vivid imagery penned! The darkness grips in an intense captivation of words. Bravo!

[Wondering Mind]

This has excellent dark imagery and descriptive lexicon. The message profound and the write very captivating, almost haunting. Very well penned.

[Nella Aboodi]

I liked the second verse so much, from top to bottom. Also, great terms are used in this poem, one of the best.

[Michael X]

you are speaking astral perspectives, thats brilliant, to be able to grasp the beyond, from the
here and now, the overshadowing nature of darkness causes worlds collide with this amazing poem

[MARZ]

nice description :) and very good vocabulary. agree with the viewer below me as well...only thing that bothered me was the "..." so often. It packs a lot of suspense to be used so much.

thanks for the reviews as well!!!

forMARZly yours

[Megan]

I really enjoy this work, it's honest. I think "the frozen dawn yawns" is fantastic!

[John Parker]

Enchanting write......kept my attention from beginning to the end......always love to read a good dark poem....well done.....