Across the Universe

No Beatles cover songs, I promise.

Tear down the gates,

Let the flood flow forth,

From the mouth of the sun.

Race across space,

Rip through time,

Pour out.

Fill the universe, 

Until you find

What is sought

Reviews

[Clockwork]

Maybe this is just me being stuck in the transcendentalist mode that I have been in this summer, but I see this piece as a message to clear the internal self of the barriers that prevent discovery.

I get that from the first two lines in stanza one. I that shows the release of a true stream of creativity which has the power to "Fill the universe" when it is released.

[schmevavikman]

this is phenominal,i love short poems that still withold an abundance of substance. well done (:

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

you have penned exactly what I try to do each day. Wonderful!