damn shadows

damn shadows

A Poem by <3

 

An entire city lies at my feet
But you are everything, everywhere
I take stroll down crowded streets
Oh, there! You are there.
 
A shadow graced my lips
And I called your name
I reach with the edge of my fingertips
Just nicking the old shame
The feeling of emptiness
The one you left for me to remember you by
You told me not to die!
Yet you’re tearing me apart on the inside!
 
 
 

© 2009 <3


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how sweet..
all city under my feet.but you are everything to me
so crowded those streets..but there you are
its you i can only see
and i call your name
and i feel all the shame,emptiness
emptiness you left me to remember you by
and you told me not to die
but i am tearing apart all inside
how lovely ,how sweet..
lovely write..

Posted 15 Years Ago


Love this
not alots there
but the imagery it gives is amazing
good work
=]

Posted 15 Years Ago



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