romantic comedy with a silent kick

romantic comedy with a silent kick

A Poem by <3

We're like a silent movie

Where the picture even lacks

A certian interaction

With ficiton and fact

The plot is too simple

The idea is loose

The characters unbelievable

Far to obtuse

 

When this all is over

Will you be ready for a sequel

When we come together

Will it ever be equal

To then?

 

The Ending is ugly

But fits the theme

The beginning was shaky

And every scene

Ended as it started

Started to make sense

Cut off at the part

with The most suspense

On the edge of our seats

Watching the decline

Continually falling

for all the same lines

 

When this all is over

Will you be ready for a sequel

When we come together

Will it ever be equal

To then?

 

© 2008 <3


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